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GROUP REVIEW

After showing our work to the class today, I must say I was a little disheartened. I was hoping to get a little more feedback (positive/negative). But from what we did get there was definitely a lot of useful information. Here are some things I noted during the rough-cut screening and the feedback we received:

-       -OVEREXPOSED d#$TREGdfgdsdcxvgdfdhh

-       -Tracking shot leading to sex scene, cut out awkward end bit

-       -City pan shot in apartment is too long

-       -Cut down blurry date shot

-       -Cut down the first kiss scene outside

-       -In terms of sound, consider layering music with actual sound

-       -A little bit of frame cropping in the last café scene, slight lack of continuity in framing.   

Looking forward to putting the final tweaks on the film. Overall I have been really happy about the way we have worked on this film. We are very on track time wise, there will be no late nights or 12 hour days…just a few little tweaks here and there and all will be finished!